Follow the story of Aria, a futanari-angel trapped by an upstart futanari dark-elf in a raid on the underdark and forced to become a lewd Arena fighter for her mistress amusement.. or does the cunning Vara have further plans for her angelic servant?
This story focuses on Futa-lewdities, with a touch of enslavement and corruption/purification. Side fetishes include lactation, monstergirls and mental changes.
Hope ya enjoy, tell me of any bugs-misspellings that slipped under the radar.
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Endings:
1.Goo-girl Host
2. Cow girl slave
3.Succubus plaything
4. Undecided
5. Obediant little slave
6. Disobediant naughty girl.
Next up: Aggra is continuing the work on/Bugfixing Ameria, whilest I prepare the next release for TLDH, introducing the lewd slave-bazaar.
Oh and by the way, if you like that writing, was done mostly with Mindflayer, you can check out their gaming over on twitch. Because why not check out the gaming from lewd writers you like? :P
At several points it looks like the same event was flagged for different obedience levels. Getting the syringe when always disobeying or the living armor's codpiece when you always obey for example.
ReplyDeleteI don't quite follow the problem here, sorry.
DeleteOkay, this'll be a long one (gonna have to break it up into pieces apparently) since I'll copy some of the text from the obedient path to hopefully explain what I mean:
Delete"H-How much like a normal armor?" Aria asked softly, her ass twitching a bit as her hips jerked from the stroking Vara was giving her.
"P-Please mistress... I w-want to make you happy, s-so I can feel g-good again like before. I... I'll do anything f-for that feeling again," Aria panted softly as the armor was dropped at her side, and she looked it over with a bit of worry.
Feeling the chestplate pressing up against her body, Aria shuddered as she felt the slimy interior suction up onto her body, and she trembled all over as her nipples perked up inside of the thing. Aria sat back on the bed, or any rug that might have been on the floor it she wasn't allowed to get on the bed, just so she wasn't on just the dirty floor. Once the boots were on with the stockings, Aria would shudder again as she felt their interiors suctioning against her soft smooth skin. "T-They'll be so beautiful when they grow, m-mistress... t-they'll be so much better, a-and pillowy for you to rest on mistress," Aria panted softly, her cock twitching as she whined up at Vara, pawing at her hands with her own.
"A completely normal armor.. from the outside." Vara grinned and whispered, with a seductive-soothing voice: "And if you behave." The drow smirked, seeming quite enticed and happy with the angels progress.
"Now thats the spirit. It feels so good to have your pure body played with. Let it happen, let your desire for those feelings grow and don't worry about consquences." Vara licked her lips.. the more the angel fell into depravity, the easier she'd be to turn into a perfect slave-tool for the drow.
"Oh yes, they will be. Big and juicy tits for my angelslave.. but the best part hasn't even started yet!" Vara cooed, and presented the codpiece of the angel[...]
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The sequence of events here is basically:
Ask about armor, talk about wanting to please, wearing the chestplate and Aria talking about how big her breasts will be. Then Vara explains that it's only a normal armor from the outside, Vara praising Aria's acceptance, Vara talking about Aria's boobs growing. (Granted this wasn't what my initial comment was about, but it also happened on this page so I noticed this.)
You have three paragraphs of Aria talking/donning the armor and then three of Vara reacting to each of these. Having an Aria paragraph followed by a Vara one would work a lot better here, imo, since you'll have an actual conversation.
Now to the actual thing I pointed out, it's part of the next section:
DeleteVara cooed, and presented the codpiece of the angel. "Actually customized for you, a rarer male variant. Now, lets slip it on." The drow leaned forward, adjusting the armorpiece. Immediatly the angel felt a sticky wetness engulfing her still rigid shaft, accomondating her in the slightly bulky armor. There was a rythmical massage along her shaft, a suckling on the tip of her cock and a warm, wet vibration caressing over her balls. Before she could even react further, there was a slimey poking at her backdoor, pushing in, a tendril like appendage beginning to rub and massage her prostate over and over. "By the way, the same thing thats happening to your breasts will happen to your balls. I want them warm, hot and filled to the brim with nice, yummy angelcum for mistress."
"It lives from your juices, in turn, protecting you, but in this case it will help to make you a slave to the lusts it offers. .. Now, Kneel. It is time to test out your mouth on me, slave." The drow grinned, a thickness twitching between her own legs, under her full dark dress.
"I... b-but I don't want to fall though, m-mistress. P-Please t-tell me I won't fall f-from such n-naughty things. P-Protect me from falling, m-mistress," Aria whimpered softly, looking scared, but she didn't try and resist any.
When Vara brought out the cock sleeve for her, Aria actually brightened up a bit, when Vara mentioned it was made especially for her. "F-For me mistress? I... I'm so happy," Aria asked, pressing her hips forward to allow Vara easier access to put the thing on her.
Feeling the soft wet stickiness of the cock sleeve as it was placed upon her, Aria moaned aloud, as one hand reached up to grasp her breasts and squeeze them again. Then she felt the prodding against her tight little asshole, and she gasped, before arching her back when feeling a slimy tendril worming its way inside, and pressing against her prostate, rubbing insistently against it and keeping her cock from calming down in the slightest. "Y-Yes mistress... I... I'm so happy to serve you, a-and my balls... t-they'll always be full of m-my cum to gift you, o-or those you wish," Aria panted softly as Vara mentioned what the suit would do to her balls, before she crawled on all fours over to Vara as she was ordered to come over to use her mouth on her mistress. "P-Please mistress... l-let me please you, m-make you feel good as you did me before," Aria said in a sultry tone, opening her mouth willingly and offering it to Vara to use as she saw fit, because her mouth, nay... her entire being belonged to Vara to use as she saw fit.
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It starts of with putting the codpiece on Aria, some exposition on what it will do, sudden reluctance on Aria's part and suddenly we're back to Vara bringing out the codpiece and Aria being grateful (previous reluctance seems to be gone) and then Vara puts the thing on her a second time, buttstuffing included with Aria dialogue (and actual reactions, which is what made me suspect this is the actual submissive part of this and the more neutral one in the beginning doesn't belong on this route even though it starts with a continuation of talking about Aria's breasts)
(Also, checking on Aria's state of mind during this scene gives me this error after a description of Aria: <> bad condition: $obediance is gte $disobediance)
I hope this was more understandable.
Now for always disobeying, once you respond defiantly after the slime battle:
Delete"Well then, its time to upgrade your armor a little more, to put my little slut in her place, what do you think? This will also help prepare you for .. your future encounters." She smirked darkly.
"F-Fine... whatever you like. Don't suppose I have much choice on the matter," Aria said, looking away from Vara as she continued to speak. "So? What do you want me to do during the matches? S-Suck their dicks, o-or whatever? S-Such a lewd thing," Aria asked with a bit of disdain in her voice.
"N-No... I won't give in. N-Not without a reason to," Aria said, though even she couldn't deny how good the sex with Vara before had felt, and Vara would be able to easily notice that, despite Aria's words, and likely knew, that she was getting to Aria a bit with her words, and that Aria was being a bit tsundere about this.
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It looks like you have Aria responding to the same thing twice, once with resignation and once with (somewhat fake) protest.
Finally on the next page:
".. Yes, I can do with you whatever I want, but it seems we need to break that into your empty little head." She waved her hands. "Freeze." And freeze, Aria did. Well not her, but the armor became locked in place while the drow went to pull out a syringe. "See I don't like using this because it can weaken someones mental faculties and make slaves less valuable, then again, you need to be more horney and less thinkey anyway. But yes, you WILL become a great dicksucker." She nodded, stepping forward, gripping Arias bottom between two fingers. "Here comes your happy slut juice!"
She exclaimed, pushing the needle into her angelslaves bottom cheek and injecting the slightly purple tinted liquid. Immediatly some of the angels reasoning clouded over, as blood shot to her shaft, a new unknown height of arousal gripping her mercilessly. "Don't worry, if your slut-juice runs out just act all defiant again, we'll get you hooked on being horny in no time my toy.. now, I dislike repeating myself. STRIP and present yourself for your new armor!" She smirked stepping to a chest in the back, a slight knocking, slithering noise coming from its inside..
"Ha... empty? My mind is far from empty," Aria retorted, before Vara ordered her to freeze, and her armor snapped tightly into place, preventing her from moving. "T-Then don't use it... whatever It, is," Aria said, trying to make herself move.
Then Vara poked her with a syringe and injected her with the purplish fluid within the thing, with Aria grunting and struggling the entire time. That is until the fluid got into her system of course, where her mind started to cloud, her cock sprang to full mast within seconds, and after Vara ordered her to remove her clothes and armor, Aria found herself complying, despite not wanting to do so, but fear forced her to do so. "W-What's that?" Aria asked through clenched teeth as she stripped.
"Ooh stingy." Vara chuckled at the angelgirls remark. "Now relax, let it take proper effect. You might struggle with a few bigger words, but other than that it'll make you nicely happy and horny soon. Either way. It also makes you obediant, just the way you want to be, deep down. Now." Vara pointed to the chest.
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We have: Freeze, explanation, the injection and the order to strip. Only then do we get into Aria's retort to the very first statement, the freeze and the injection.
It's really weird to have the characters hold one side of the conversation, do their things and then go into the other side of it with a repeat of the events with the other perspective.
I hope that this clears it up and it's not too much of a pain to parse with the big chunks pasted in.
Ah. I'm sorry you don't like the storytelling style but its no bug, its just how it was written, ,to be fair, I do plan to make no.IV differently.
Deletecant seem to get the 4th ending, any tips for that?
ReplyDeletegot a flag in the State of Arias Mind section; <> bad condition: $obediance is gte $disobediance just thought I'd let you know
ReplyDeleteOverall pretty damn good
Sorry, but your link does not work...
ReplyDeleteworks fine on my end.
DeleteStill... A redirect loop. Maybe you will update the link after all? Please?
DeleteThe linkage issue should be fixed now.
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